Aw, so cute! The kind of story that unfortunately doesn't seem to really happen on bad days...

This story gets interesting real quick! Although I find it hard to believe Rebecca's mother is so careless and her sister, such a pain...I pity her though. I would've gone mad if somebody read my journal.

Anyhow, I'm eager to read more of your work!

This is one of my favorite stories on fanfic, Whenever i get a chance I reread it. Just thought i would share :)

Hey Tessandra!
Well, your story was fantastic!
I loved to see how their relationship enveloped and at the end, I hoped that he would say it, that he loves her... It was kind of unrealistic ending (getting in the White House) but I liked the tense feeling and afterwards the Happy End!
You did a great job!
DA-chen

OMG HE DIDNT DIE. not that i thought he would. but there was a chance. and i am so glad he didnt cause the end was absolutely awesome. as was the rest of the story. ahahaha. i loved it :D

Awh. Cute story. You did a good job, even if slightly cliche. Yay for romance!

Okay first, I live in Australia and don't mind you bugging me.
Second I can't help with James going to New york or the title.
With the plane crash she wouldn't have been allowed on the crash sit or any where near it. The victims all would have been sent straight to a hospital to get checked out and then have to make statements about what happened. Witnesses also are required to make statements. The statements and investigations are made by whatever that government agency is called in America. So only they, firefighters, police and amulances are allowed on the site and in veiwing distance of the crash site.

Also the White house thing, I don't know much about it but I do know it wouldn't be that easy. Also Jadein ( or however you spell his name) would have been in hospital perhaphs in a private secluded room or whatever (don't know much about the American health system though).

Also your humour amuses me then again I have an Australian sense of humour which makes fun of everything (see chasers war on everything.) especially our our selves and politicians :D

"What animal would you compare guys to?"

"I have no idea . . . orangutans. Or chipmunks."


LOL! I was reading that at like 3 in the morning and I was trying so hard not to laugh loud because everyone else was asleep.

lmfaii, ur humour is pretty similiar to my humour..i like xD
i live in australia, so u can totali bug me, but im not sure when you posted this and need any help..so yea.
plzz update!!

LMFAO @ Fred. bahahaa
i luv this stori...my internet is slow so i havent been reviewing tho..sorri!!

I Live in Australia... and have no problem with you bugging me about stuff if you still need too. Just msg me or whatever...

wow, the second part of this chapter is so beautifully written! It so sad, I want to cry! Hust read the whole thing in the last two days and its amazing!

Oh my goodness! Get this thing published or something! I- in a sense- couldn't put it down! It was SO increadibly amazing! Don't you dare change it, because it was awesome! I loved every second of it! It was funny, and cute, and kept me guessing. Uh! Get it published for real, because that was all sorts of good! :) I didn't like the names at first, but your storyline was so good, that I fell in love with those characters. Jadrien is wonderful! Name and character! And just... wow. Wonderfully written! Keep it up! :)

*Ready to rip your head off* GRAWR! wheres the eppy?!?!?! :O PLEASE I BEG OF YOU... one of my favorite stories so far! Please finish!

RAWR best author/book ever! I like stayed up way past when I was supposed to go to sleep and I have way to much to do tmro at like really in the morning and its like 2:14AM and my mother would abosolutely kill me if she knew, good thing she doesn't ;) Wow. I really like this book and I know the last time you edited it was like in 2004 BUT you never got the epilogue out :( and you said you would... thats really sad. lol. I