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| Boberick. 2008-08-18 ch 4,  | abuseI don't get what just happened there... They were at the airport then they were at Starbucks. Did I miss something...? |
| Boberick. 2008-08-18 ch 3, | abuseYour breath isn't FOUL. I'm pretty sure a fowl is a bird. |
| Boberick. 2008-08-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. Her life really does suck. And her sister is an evil **. How can a sister be that evil? I so badly want things to brighten up for her... Yeah. Je dois dire; je l'aime. |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-08-11 ch 25, | abusecute - but i really wish there was an epilogue,, |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-08-10 ch 1, | abusei.hate.amanda. |
| AkunamattataTM 2008-08-06 ch 10, | abuseGoodbye in arabic is ma' salama. Well that means peace to you but arabians use it as bye |
| K. Bash -08 2008-07-29 ch 25, | abuseyou should expand the ending. |
| a beginner 2008-07-29 ch 25, | abuseawesome, simple |
| xSilentTearsx 2008-07-17 ch 24, | abuseLoved it! It was simply perfection! =D |
| rockjam 2008-07-10 ch 25, | abuseOMG! The best story ever! I looved it. Cant wait for the epilogue! |
| SecretSister 2008-06-30 ch 25, | abusehey there. i found this story a few days ago and i think it's really really good. i love this story, it's awesome! honestly speaking, the whole story is awesome, except for a few spelling/grammatical errors here and there. but that's not the point. no one cares about those things. i honestly think that the ending is hanging off a cliff. i mean the plane crash and everything is awesome. but i think u ought to write another chapter, e.g chapter 25, saying what happened next. i mean, shouldn.t her parents ground her after knowing she went to another state without their knowing, what's happen to james and amanda, how does jadrien and becca continue their lives. i mean becca can't possibly be living in the white house as well. so yeah that's my opinion. anyway the story is really really great and i love it to bits! keep up the good work! |
| xXTwiligherXx 2008-06-28 ch 25, | abuseOMG! I think I going die if I don't read the next chapter. You are a wonderful writer =D. The story was great so far. My fave part was the same as yours and when she get into the White House, and they see each other. God, I couldn't stop reading =D. What can I say, I'm hooked x] |
| BurntSky 2008-06-22 ch 25, anon. | abusebeautiful beautiful story ^^ but.. oh dear.. you're not going to write the epilogue are you? It's been two years since you've updated anything, and I don't think you've ever been this bad, so yeah, you must have lost interest in writing.. |
| chocoholic 2008-06-12 ch 25, anon. | abuseaw its so gd *Sniff sniff* wish there was a epilogue but o well at first when i read it i fort oo all american gurl here coz of the hole president son thing and him being hot but then its actually reali different so thats reali gd! |
| Aratrika 2008-06-12 ch 25, anon. | abuseEPILOGUE. EPILOUGE. EPILOGUE. NEEDED OR SHALL DIE. MUST SAVE LIFE. MUST SAVE LIFE. EPILOGUE. TESSANDRA. EPILOGUE. Yeah, sorry about that... I am kinda desperate and all... Oh and guess what? I'm from India! Yay! Oh and guess how old I am! I know you have a million reviews to reply to and all but plz reply to this... I bet you won't guess... Lol... Yeah, k, high on air... So please... Epilogue ok? Yeah, thanks... Love ya lots! Waiting for epilogue, Aratrika...! |