i lavved the stroy!

it is like the movie "the first daughter"

but in a teen way and more rebellious way:) LOL

keep up:)

great story.!.finished it in bout 4 hrs...i think LOL

last chap was a bit drawn out (sorry i skiipped a few paragraphs i jst wanted to get to the juicy part quicker.!:D)

y didnt he tell her he loved her.?.

LOL

btw im australian LOL

yu said sumfin bout questions.?.

*tear, tear.*

so sweet.

LOVE LOVE LOVE

i say not lol

im sry im pointing out mistakes but i do love this story so im hoping it makes up for it 'His gave still held hers' and softly clothing the door

'slash' water on ur face? lol

love it

OMG! so touching!

omg! i was reading this chapter with genuine tears streaming down my face! you are such an awesome writer!

aw...! this chapter is so sweet!

*woot!* she is like completely in love wiht him!

okay...after 9 chapters...I have finally decided to review! Sorry about not reviewing before but anyways...This story is really good. *being stupid and stating the obvious* I like the plot and the characters and everything and that's about all I can't wait to read the rest!

so im sitting here and read this over and over again.

just because i cant get enough.

YEAH

3400. comment :D

i rock.

just do. i love your story. love it. love it. love it.

I found the "comparing guys to fish" thing funny. Hehe. God, when I read that it was finished I was like no! And then there was another chapter and I was like YAY! and then you said at the top that it wasn't another chapter and I nearly cried. It was so good. I loved the title. So unusual. When I saw it I was like "I wonder what this is about?"... so good. I'm gushing so much! I love it!

Hey, read the whole story today :) I really enjoyed your random humourous sections so please don't delete them! It was similar to the AAG only... different, if you know what I mean? I really enjoyed it.

and please write the non-existent epilogue soon!