|Reviews for And Then She Met the President's Son|
| carleyshake 6/4/12 . chapter 1
This story is so sweet and amazing! .
| DA-chen1 5/5/12 . chapter 24
Hi, dear author of She met the president's son!
I really love your story because Rebecca is real and Jadrien is a wonderful asshole at the beginning!
I like it, they are battling and fighting with words in such a natural way.
I found a fault, when she is talking about shrinks.. it's called a psychologist.. not a physiologist! (The difference is, shrinks are docs and psychologists together)
I like the idea, James is picking her up and Jadrien is really jealous, there is the breaking point! Jadrien understand now, what he is feeling about Rebecca.
And please, please don't edit your passages of your humour.. that's the good part of your story at all. It has your touch!
The character 'Cat' is interesting but she is dying a very uninteresting death in this story.. you have to write more about her in the end, give her a role at all.. perhaps she can reveal a big secret or something...
When Rebecca is entering Jad's room, it would be really cool when she had to identify herself, that she was really spending time with him.. perhaps something like whispering in Moira's ear that she knows about the french vampire dialect! ;-)
I really love your story! Mira
| PorkythePig 1/1/12 . chapter 25
have read this 1000 times.
and yes i live in Australia and I don't mind being bugged about stupid stuff :D
| Uncle Rupert 11/21/11 . chapter 1
i bet The President's son is capable wiedling an axe haha just saying...
good start now onwards i march lets see how poor rebecca's life turns out
| blusoul-420 11/5/11 . chapter 25
Interesting :) I don't mean to nag, but it would've been a much more enjoyable read if there weren't so many errors, from minor things like "gave" instead of "gaze" to expressions being strangely mixed up. So if you're still editing, I'd suggest looking at grammatical errors before anything else. Otherwise, I liked the characters a lot, and the ending
| PunkRockLuvr 10/1/11 . chapter 1
:) i'm reading this story for the second time... :D love it.
really awesome story
| ItsJustJulz 9/21/11 . chapter 25
Brilliant story! Highly amusing! If you still needed someone to bug on questions about Australia then hit me up, otherwise congratulations on a well written story :) xx
| ChameleonZ 9/13/11 . chapter 1
omg. 3252 reviews. i feel like a midget.
| LovenLife 6/28/11 . chapter 25
i absolutely loved the story! :D it's the first story i've read about a president's son...and its amazing...was hooked on to it till the end..(LOVED Jadrien!)..i also liked Cat and Mark...i hope there is an epilogue or a sequel...do let your readers know i'm sure they'll want to read it...
you are awesome! :D
| oracle 6/21/11 . chapter 25
Do you plan on writing an epilogue, or mabey a sequel? If you do please let your readers know. O really love this story and it would be a shame to not continue it. It as been year you know?
| There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand 6/16/11 . chapter 25
BEST. STORY. EVER.
AND I'M NOT JOKING!
| saritta 6/15/11 . chapter 24
I was ready to ball my eyes out ! Thank God I didnt have to I loved it, I havent seen any stories about the presedient or his children even and it was really good. Job well done! I hope you post the epiloge soon :)
| Rhea2207 6/7/11 . chapter 1
I love this story! i think this is the 4th time i'm reading it! you're absolutely brilliant!
:D i love jadrien!
| sweetpea265 5/7/11 . chapter 10
I'm liking Mark. Neat twist with him knowing Jadrien. Now Rebecca has at least one person she can talk to truthfully with.
| sweetpea265 5/7/11 . chapter 9
So, I'm glad she's not getting back together with James. I'm really starting to like Rebecca now. Caring for her sister even after she "stole" her boyfriend. Glad the characters are showing a little more insight into who they are.