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| Beth 2004-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's inspirational. Makes me want to go out and be special. I like the way the words flow in this too. |
| weelilwolf 2002-10-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseahh...how cool. How do you think up such great sayings like this poem?? Man, now you make my poems seem stupid...::rolls eyes:: I really like this. Yeah, it is uplifting. Makes ya think, too! great work. by the way, my pen name is weelilwolf, if u want to read my poetry... |
| Pardalis 2002-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseHolds that small amount of hope... "We are at one another's mercy. Only in helping other's do we help outselves." You're a wonderful poet, judging from what I've read so far. |
| tarnished oversoul 2002-06-06 ch 1, | abusenope- this is definitely a happy poem :P- and i loved the message clearly summed up in the last line. TO |
| Whiro 2002-05-26 ch 1, | abuseah yes, very nice, i liked it, it is kinda uplifting, bravo! great poem! ~Whiro~ |
| Seravy 2002-05-19 ch 1, | abuseShort sweet flowing and beautiful. Your poem inspired hope within me, revealing significance in every individual. But I think it would have been better if you left out "humans are like that too". I kindda felt it was a little too obvious and too away from of the poetic flow. Either then that, I'm awe-struck once again. You're quite a poet. |
| Rini 2002-05-09 ch 1, | abuseReally good, a break from all the pain, ne? I really like this one also, but I won't ramble on this one. Talk to you soon. |
| PurportedDwarf 2002-05-05 ch 1, | abuseCool...Seems like Jesus said something like this...I'm not really a religous buff or anything...But I think it was something like..."A mustard seed is as small as a gran of sand and will blow away in an instant in a gentle wind...But that one little seed can grow into a great tree"...I think that's how it went...I don't know...But that's how this poem is...The little things really can make a difference sometimes :) |