Gah! *pouts8 You make me think about my stupid crush for three years, Amorina! T.T!
Seriously, though, it is a lovely poem--and it's your FIRST? *looks at her first and sighs, tossing it away* Honestly, this is brilliant. I think I'll go read more *shuffles off*

This is awesome, I think you lied about it being your first, I'd appreciate it if you woul R/R some of my poetry I have a small collection called "Welcoming Darkness" posted, I wish I could give you constructive criticism but all I can say is keep writing, your poem rocks.
~Toki Kibbles ^_~

wow, i dont understand y u dont get more reviews for ur work. itz realli great, except for the few typos, but itz truly great and emotional that it pulls u in. u might like my poetry, and plz read my story, ' a story, a first'. u might enjoy them...well, i hope u consider it! :), agen, great job on ur poem!

i think this is really good, when can we expect to see more??