Reviews for The Land of a Thousand Names or The Lost One

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Isabell 2005-06-14 ch 3, anon.	abuseYour chapters... they've disappeared! Or at least part of them anyway. I hope this is just a temporarily problem with FictionPress since I really liked this story. If it's not and you don't have any backups, I think my friend downloaded this story. I could see if she still has it.
Sycho Skitz 2003-08-31 ch 19,	abusei haven't read the whole thing yet but it's awesome so far! lol i'm leaving to go to my job so i'll have to read the rest later! kudos! -Rain-
Darkness Shadowed 2003-07-12 ch 1,	abuse: )
Nichole Sedai 2003-07-09 ch 28,	abuseGalen and Asriya remind me of a relationship I had with a guy once, only not quite. I thought this chapter was very cute, as far as their interaction. Galen wasn't being horrible, at least until he wouldn't back off when she didn't want him. Poor girl, though. Very confused. Very confusing. I liked it. It worked well. Keep updating!
Raija the 'HAHHHAHA!' Darkn... 2003-07-05 ch 28, anon.	abuseAW, that was soo cute. Let's all be on Galen's side! chorus of 'Why can't we be friends?' starts up in the background And it's soo sweet. ahahhahahahaa! Woh! laughs some more You know, I think Galen is a schizo. Or has weird personality problems. One of the above. snickers Ho ho? What kind of idiot says 'ho ho?' Ah hah! This must be from Santa Claus' side of the family. But Galen isn't from that line...oh well. "“You’ll be back. You always come back!” Galen shouted to her back as she walked into the dark forest. “She always comes back,” He said confidently to one of his men."...That...blinks...odd.. And then the return of the jerk. Oh well. But it's great that your writing this again You have inspired me! Okay, not really, but then again, nothing inspires me. OH well. Se yeks.
Nichole Sedai 2003-06-22 ch 27,	abuseOh, he's going to be angry at her! For a minute, and then he's going to be really angry at Guther. He should be the one scared, in anyone. The monsters scare me. That's not a good thing, and yet I fear she'll consider it to get more power for her prince. Update soon!
Raija 2003-06-21 ch 27, anon.	abuseOh ho! Going willingly to Galen, are we? evil learing grin that i cannot do in real life I knew it! YOU WANT HIM! loud coughs and mutter of, "I didn't say that aloud, did i?" And you call me a masochist. Come on! You're letting yourself be captured, and for...thinks Perhaps you have better reasons that I do...but still! It's Gay-GAh-lin! shrugs Oh well, at least it's for a noble cause. shrug again All's fair in...did you say war isn't Elvis' forte? Well at least there's ONE advantage in this relationship. Don't be scary at me! The story made me do it!
Loony 2003-06-07 ch 22, anon.	abuse“You’ll never get away with this!” Asriya cried, for tradition’s sake. haha, this is my favorite line!
Raija The Madly Laughing Da... 2003-05-20 ch 25, anon.	abuseUh huh...writes slowly, 'green...flecked with gold.' Was that bright green? We! Aww, it's so sweet. Galen is worried about poor you! Aww, and Elvis is stupid and sheepy. Don't let it near your neck! It's only a vampire! I will break down the door slowly! Galen was so nice in this. Too bad he will recess into a perverted weirdy suicidal salad jerk. mhmm! That's the Galen we all (meaning you. And Elvis) know and love! Waahahaha! Is funny!
Raija the Laughing Darknigh... 2003-05-11 ch 24, anon.	abuseIt's a 'you're so beautiful, so perfect' theme! You threw a tantrum! I luagh a lot and spell stuff wrong! I suppose I can sympathise with you being all locked up, except the key was right there and stuff. But is funny anyway, and I laugh. Even though we didn't get to find out if you got healed. You obviously did. Oh well, I ramble. MOOKIES!
Raija D. 2003-05-11 ch 23, anon.	abusespeaks with mucho strain MM...very nice chapter. Everything is rather confusing, but that's cuase I don't really know what happened. chokes in attempt not to luagh Yes. It is very good. Galen is very...HAHHAHAHHA!...sorry. Pathetic. As usual. And a bad fencer. ooh, fencing... Umm...I hope...you get healed. (obviously you do, or this story would be very short). Amen. what?
Raija D. 2003-04-21 ch 22, anon.	abuseHey, a knife would be a quick death, wouldn't it? Yes...so quick and happy! Annoying until they stop--I should try that! thinks...images of broken jaws Nevermind. Heh, "culture viewed contact differently". Obsidian should meet these people... wah, Galen gets punished by the fay faerie fae ness! oh, the ness of the fae! images of JC superstar Pilate counting out lashes Gah, faerie punishment! glances at earlier comment GAh! runs screaming away! Dawn: OOps, were those your eyelids I lifted off? Whoops!
a fellow mad-one 2003-04-12 ch 21, anon.	abuseYou call that going insane? I call it being lucky. I also call it "welcome to my life." Only for me, it's not one other world, oh no, any fantasy book I read, I go there, but I do it in a strange way. You see, you're lucky, because your world is stable, it's for you, you are a part of it, and you stay you. When I'm active, I spend most of my time wishing I was in a place where all the horrible things and inventions (and political figures...)I know didn't exist. Rarely am I able to transport myself to a place like that. It can happen through some books, though. It's mostly like a form of meditation. I turn on some "Cirque du Soleil" music, loud, in my walkman, turn off the lights in my room, close the door, get in bed, prop myself up, and open my mind. I put myself in another world, sometimes one of my own, sometimes one I've read about. I feel everything, experience everything, but there's usually a sense of "I know this isn't real" and that ruins it. It sometimes happens when I sleep. That's probably why I sleep so much. Anything (besides drugs!) to escape. If your world is substance to you, then I salute you. for me, it is just a want, one always there. But think on this: a world is never perfect, unless it is actually a figment of our imaginations. Yet, as a result of imgination, they are bound to be strange, and exciting. Mine certainly seem perfect to me. Despite rather high crime rate...for some reason, I tend to be a thief (a rather good one, I love excitement.) It's not that my life here is unhappy, I love it, but I've always wanted more, had a bit of a TOO active imagination. I've always done it. So, if you're going crazy, then welcome to the club. And if that is insanity, then, in my opinion, it is insanity, not ignorance, that is bliss. P.S. if you want a full analysis of what your other life means about your mind, e-mail me and I'll try it! (always up for a challenge)
The All Holy Smartness 2003-04-08 ch 1,	abuseVoice #2: I think your story had potential. The description is very pretty, and the events going on between the main characters is satisfactory (could be fleshed out a little more). What you could do to make this a more worthwhile read, however, is A) Go more in depth with who the characters actually are B) Really go into why the characters are doing what they're doing (right now it's just kind of, "I love you!" - "No, I love YOU" C) What is the larger event going on around them to make them do what they do. I really do think this could be a great story if it had a little more of those three things.
Nichole Sedai 2003-04-06 ch 21,	abuseI think I told you once that I didn't like the journal entries very much -- that I viewed them as a necessary evil. This one is different. This one has more meaning and depth, and this one works well. But, notwithstanding the eloquence of this journal entry, I have to admit that I am rather lost. I've been confused since chapter 16 or 17, and I don't think I've been un-lost. Who's fighting and why, and what did the faeries have to do with anything, and has she always been going back and forth between worlds? And who has control of the palace place they used to be in? I don't mean to be difficult, but I'm quite lost.

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