This was pretty good, found a few mistakes but no biggie. It's funny, but this sounds like my life. I write lots of poems like this...you should check them out.

this is a really good poem... you should write more ^^ It's very original and I like the topic.

There is great lyrical quality to this, it flows very smoothly. This is the kind of song I would love to hear with music, but I would also be afraid that the composing might cover the lyrics. Very nice!

This is a stunning peice of poetry and I hope that this review encourages you to keep updating and don't give up on your ever faithful auidience.
You are an exceptionally talented authoress Christine and I will read much, much more of your work when I can.
xxooxx
Emma.
a.k.a
Eve Lindsey

I like it. It's cool.