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| deepinthought 2004-06-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty good, found a few mistakes but no biggie. It's funny, but this sounds like my life. I write lots of poems like this...you should check them out. |
| jfqzx 2003-05-18 ch 1, | abusethis is a really good poem... you should write more ^^ It's very original and I like the topic. |
| teh.katie 2002-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThere is great lyrical quality to this, it flows very smoothly. This is the kind of song I would love to hear with music, but I would also be afraid that the composing might cover the lyrics. Very nice! |
| Eve Lindsey 2002-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is a stunning peice of poetry and I hope that this review encourages you to keep updating and don't give up on your ever faithful auidience. You are an exceptionally talented authoress Christine and I will read much, much more of your work when I can. xxooxx Emma. a.k.a Eve Lindsey |
| cloudweaver 2002-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It's cool. |