Well, since you was so smart putting your poem in the Scandinavian category, I just want to say: Dette var et bra dikt! Det er virkelig livet du skriver om :) Og en ting til, du burde ikke være så selvgod... Det gir et veldig dårlig inntrykk på oss ikke engelske...
So, you've seen then that it's quite depressive to write in Scandinavian? I mean, you never get any rewievs!
Good luck whit the writing...

A great deal of wisdom in few words! Like it, girl:)

Since you put it in the Scandinavian category: Ja, dette var bra! Jeg syntes at du burde skrive enda et dikt! Jeg tuller ikke! And if you don't understand that, you should have put it in the English category!