*aw*
lol i hadnt read this one yet, easily expected from me...
yea, this one's sad...but its a really good story

~tears well up in eyes~

don't ever write a story like this ever again! it made me cry. why couldn't you have just written a really corny ending like :he jumped off the bed completely better and they went out on a date and later got married.

That would have been sufficient. Whenever i read stories like this i end up having nightmares about them. i keep forgetting to check if they're angst or not.

It really is a beautiful story but its just so sad.

that was such a wonderful storie but sooo sad *sniffle sniffle*

WOW. That wqas the most touching short story i have read in a long time. you write beautifuly and should keep up the good work. i need to go now and huddle in a corner and cry. :'( ((Sniffles))