| Reviews for Night |
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obsidian katana 4/27/03 . chapter 1wow...awesome poem! i really like this a lot! you're a great writer! anyway, this is very well written, nicely described. i know how you feel. good job on this! keep up the great work! |
The Crazy Cricket 10/14/02 . chapter 1This reminds me of my tiny story about night time...I totally follow you! Keep writing! |
Keriana Williams 10/7/02 . chapter 1ADD MORE TO THIS POEM! _ Sounds exactly how I felt a long time ago (Parents getting divoced, moving across the country, freaked outta my mind...) Lol...Yea...Good poem. |
Rose Dark Thorn 9/19/02 . chapter 1I really think you should add more to giv more description about this person's fears and how she/he is feeling right now. That would make it ten times better. I like it anyway though. |
Shadowgirl 8/21/02 . chapter 1I like this view of the night. I have a different view, but in the end the night comes anyway. Even though the poem is a bit short I really like it! |
Jade6 5/21/02 . chapter 1I think this has a lot of potential and I think you should expand upon it and work on some of the more concrete fears associated with the dark... I think your line *And so I face my darkest fears...* could be used as build up for something more... anyway, that is just what I think! Great little poem whether you add more or leave it as it is... ) |
TK Styles 5/8/02 . chapter 1A short poem, but with these few words it gets its point across wonderfully. Keep up the good work :). I await your next work. Oh and I added two new poems read and review them, please. Peace. |
Daredee 5/8/02 . chapter 1We have conflicting opinions about soemthings. i love the night but the poem is really good. (Reminds me of the my finer works *jokes*) Actually, it conveys feeling really well. |