|Reviews for Night|
| obsidian katana 4/27/03 . chapter 1
wow...awesome poem! i really like this a lot! you're a great writer! anyway, this is very well written, nicely described. i know how you feel. good job on this! keep up the great work!
| The Crazy Cricket 10/14/02 . chapter 1
This reminds me of my tiny story about night time...I totally follow you! Keep writing!
| Keriana Williams 10/7/02 . chapter 1
ADD MORE TO THIS POEM! _ Sounds exactly how I felt a long time ago (Parents getting divoced, moving across the country, freaked outta my mind...) Lol...Yea...Good poem.
| Rose Dark Thorn 9/19/02 . chapter 1
I really think you should add more to giv more description about this person's fears and how she/he is feeling right now. That would make it ten times better. I like it anyway though.
| Shadowgirl 8/21/02 . chapter 1
I like this view of the night. I have a different view, but in the end the night comes anyway. Even though the poem is a bit short I really like it!
| Jade6 5/21/02 . chapter 1
I think this has a lot of potential and I think you should expand upon it and work on some of the more concrete fears associated with the dark... I think your line *And so I face my darkest fears...* could be used as build up for something more...
anyway, that is just what I think! Great little poem whether you add more or leave it as it is... )
| TK Styles 5/8/02 . chapter 1
A short poem, but with these few words it gets its point across wonderfully. Keep up the good work :). I await your next work. Oh and I added two new poems read and review them, please. Peace.
| Daredee 5/8/02 . chapter 1
We have conflicting opinions about soemthings.
i love the night but the poem is really good.
(Reminds me of the my finer works *jokes*)
Actually, it conveys feeling really well.