This is an amazing poem. It is probably the most clear discription that i've ever heard! When i read it, a flash of recognition and understanding swept by me! As i said, an amazing poem.

This is incredible, it gets better and better and in the end it explodes! I love it.

Wow! Tremendously well written, as usual. Not only did the poem itself create a great atmosphere, the acrostic part matched it perfectly!

(Gee how I wish I could write as well as you.)

Wonderful! I know someone named Jack...unfortunately, he's a big loser, so I can't relate him to your poem :). Anyway, this is great! I love your name poems! Your acrostics are so original, I envy you so much! PLEASE keep writing!