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| Beth 2004-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseTo kiss a perfect being will destroy you...but then again so will eternal longing. |
| Whiro 2002-07-19 ch 1,  | abuseHey! Wow I know that feeling! Great Poem!! Bravo!! ~Whiro~ |
| Immortal Muse 2002-07-11 ch 1, | abusei read ur poem and it waz amazing, i liked he last 2 lines. i have a poet friend, on this site, that also enjoys ur work, and suggested this poem to me. if u liked my poem, u might like hers, our style is 'bout the same.if u want to look up this author, her name is Tarnished Oversoul. keep up the good word. I.M./G_O_D. |
| tarnished oversoul 2002-06-04 ch 1, | abuseoooh! awesome poem- i was trying to write something along the lines of this today (except i can't write love poems- nto even angtsy one with my crush to act as muse inspiration)-sigh. Alas- i shall be trapped forever to write anti-society- ne- i'll be back to read more of your stuff (the last line is awesome- really) TO |
| Keiko Hidaka 2002-05-25 ch 1, | abuselove or..... hey, need some tums? |
| Seravy 2002-05-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. Haven't been reading poems in a while and when I do, I see all these great ones. Have you ever felt this way about someone? the confusion and nervousness within really came through and I really wish I could relate to it. Somehow, because I've never fallen in love, I found this poem a little surreal but filling me with a longing to get to know this bitter sweet feeling. great poem once again. |
| midnights shadow 2002-05-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I've never had quite the viseral experience that this is. I hope it's love. If not better see a cardiac specialist. |
| Rini 2002-05-09 ch 1, | abuseoh wow, this is great. The images and wording of this is awesome really, kinda scarry in a way. Well written, great job. Keep writing, I'm hoping to see more soon. |