 APersonAndAHalf 2004-08-14 . chapter 1Woah, this is great. Last line: "So run with it." That's just so...amazing. I love this. Cool. Yes. I. Like. Short. Sentences.
~A. Person. |
 bob15 2003-03-05 . chapter 1Beautifully written! Very inspiring and briliantly done. I'm very impressed and look forward to reading more of your work. |
 grey spirit 2002-05-22 . chapter 1Sometimes what is created off the top of people's heads is something wonderful. Like this. I like the last two lines especially. |
 Princegino 2002-05-14 . chapter 1i like this poem! r&r mine sumtime! i reely like this poem! keep riting and ill review! |
 Demented Fairy 2002-05-12 . chapter 1*applauds* Very good! I truly loved it. I'll have to agree with the other person who reviewed. The last few lines were great. "They say you're a mistake/so run with it." I dunno...I just really liked that. Keep up the excellent work! |
 aNGeLz3x*prOtOn 2002-05-09 . chapter 1this is fantastic! i love the last few lines.... it just fit! |