I love this story! But there's something wrong with the formatting. Maybe it's just my computer, but there's these weird symbols in the middle of the story and some chapters are cut off. Bizarre.

Hey great story! I read the whole thing and came back to see the pic but the link dosen't work. Is there some other place where a pic is available?
Blessings,
Leona

cool story. please write more.

cool, and oh-so-sweet. look forward to reading the promised story with them in. :)

Absolutely loved this story. It's now my favorite on FictionPress. Loved the way the supposed evil elf, turned out to not be evil. The humans were the evil ones! Good job.

Wai! I loved this story, very unusual. Malach is very interesting for a Drow, but I like him. Not many drow have violet eyes, it's a rarity, but he does. Very unique. You have created a wonderful story here, I really did enjoy reading it.

The Drow Rule Supreme!

great story

Now that was a satisfying ending! Very sweet, with some action, and a dab of suspence. Oh so very cool.

Yay! You didn't kill him! I'm soo happy! If you do continue I'll be happy to read. I know what being strapped for time is like. I've just moved in to college life. There's not time here.
Keep writing!

Aww what a sweet ending.. Having completed only two of my stories..I bet finishing this had given you a sense of pride and awe.. Well if it didn't it did me.. I just felt so giddy.. Now I wish I can complete my others ::chuckles:: Good luck on the stories ahead

I really don't blame Gilliana for holding up her own against Sherwood..but he was speaking the truth ::sighs:: My Kiirri had to learn that..and two out of the three children she gave Kheldin looked drow.. Their lives were hell.. but anyway..just like Gilliana to Kiirri..Love does eventually conquer all..and like she told Kheldin in town.. She didn't care what others thought..just as long as she loved him..that's all that matters.. ergh..I'm spouting again.. Least Gilliana thought of Malach's chain mail.. assassins and warriors often used them to safe guard themselves.

Yikes.. that's not good.. Bet Malach's mind is going to think on that ::Has to go and hold off her drows..for a few of them well most of them did stray to other species..:: Shows you how pig headed most human's are.. Hanali she accepts love between races.. and I bet other dieties of love do

Aww what a tender moment.. Least know Gilliana knows how much he does care for her.. And a woman has to use her wiles at times to get what she wants.. And Gilliana is no different.. Most of my female characters are giving her the thumbs up while all the males are telling Malach he's dense for not taking..well except for a handful..like the blushing ones ::looks to Zarran who is scowling at his mun, turning to walk away::

Now THAT was a satisfying ending. Very well done! My only complaint is that it's over and I can't read it for the first time again. Well, I hope you write the story you mentioned in the a/n! I'd certainly read it.

whoa~ i love it!!! human+drow pairings always seem to suck me in.. X_x... lol. anyway, i am looking forward to this new story you promised!! :-D