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Yoikiro 2003-06-03 . chapter 4
Hm...Argo finaly came!;)...how CUTE!*laughs evily*HAHAHHAHAHHAHA!...I LOVE IT!...but why didn't you continued it??!!...it's too short!...and Misako still hasn't show up!...I like the part with the katana, but you allready know that...I was just telling my roommate about your story and she wants to read it when you have more that 12 chapters up, so she can get into it..."This is no longer my burden(Argo")...I LOVE this part...well, talk to you later!...I'll be wating for the next part!...Ja ne Raiko-chan...

Yoi-chan
Haley Brooke 2003-05-19 . chapter 1
I love your fanfic (Raiko The Elf). Have you wrote the 3rd chapter yet? I have
one question in chapter 2 is Raiko still a child (by elf standards) or did she
age in the chrystal?

Keep writting
*ShadowKeeper*
Judy Chorney 2003-04-25 . chapter 1
I really liked the chapter. I found a few grammer problems with
it though.

The first one was "gave finally up" It should be
"finally gave up" and "to convince to wear a
dress" should be "to convince her to wear a dress"

I'm sorry if I seem rude. I don't mean to. I know it's late, but I
haven't checkedd my e-mail in a while. Have a nice day.
:-)
Michelle Morrison 2003-04-25 . chapter 2
Hi Sonics girl,


I liked your story since it was new and different and I haven't seen about elves not unless you include Lord of the Rings or Harry Potter. Anyway it was very creative if only I could write something without so many grammar mistakes in it with the rushing of finishing a story. I just was wondering how was living in Japan like for your sister since I want to go there to live to be an Japanese transalator?! Okay I've gotta go bye. . .




Queenmichellity --
Serena Ragsdale 2003-04-25 . chapter 3
Hi! I have really enjoyed your story so far. I was wondering if you
will be sending out any more chapters. I really would like to know
what happens next. Thanks.
Alyssa 2003-04-10 . chapter 3
This is so good! you have to write more. So please write more soon!
Mel Deeb 2003-03-26 . chapter 1
Rakio,
Those two stories were great.
And on the second chapter when you said those ideas were yours, well
I never would take your ideas. Talk to you later.

Mel
valerie zarazee 2003-03-19 . chapter 1
Hi, my name is valerie and I've read both of your chapters. I think
they're really good. I can't wait for the next chaptor! You're a
really good writer! Keep up the good work! ;)

~Valerie
brianne muscatelli 2003-02-17 . chapter 2
i really like ur story. its very exciting. i cant wait to read part
2. i sent out a story, no one read it tho. i hope u have more luck
than me sincerely, ~brie brie~
brianne muscatelli 2003-02-17 . chapter 1
part 2 is good 2
Apricot Mages 2003-02-13 . chapter 1
That's awesome!!! You're a great writer. I'm actually writing a book (it has absoloutely nothing to do with Sailor Moon). I'll email you a copy. I have to find it, and it will be an attatchment. It's quite long. It's a fantasy book about this girl named Savahna (suh-vahn-a, I like it pronounced that way best). I'll email it to you in a minute.

Love ya all,

Appie
ryann carroll 2003-02-10 . chapter 3
i thought the story was really awasome mail me more plz at sunmoonwarior@sailormoon.com
hikaru zaing 2003-02-10 . chapter 2
its great!!!!!!!!!i luv it!well i'm writting a book...i'll tell u it sum time k??

bye!

~rach*eal A*R~
Alleyna Vuong 2003-02-10 . chapter 1
ur story was very good.i like it.please send me more.thanks
Mel Deeb 2003-02-10 . chapter 3
Dear Raiko,

That was great!!!!!

I can't wait for the next one.



From,

Mel(Melisa)

P.S. How old are you??
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