This was one of the most exciting stories I've ever read. Your descriptions of the characters physical sensations and visions were out of this world. I loved that Eadoin and Idande were reunited in the end, because their love for each other did seem real and long lasting I loved all the characters, but surprisingly my favorite was the evil demon Zayn. I'm thrilled to read that you will be continuing the saga with Zayn trying to find his way in this world. I truly enjoyed your story and will want to reread it in the future. Thank you for sharing your great imagination with everyone, and please keep writing cause maybe you'll turn your book to a script and then maybe a movie. I'd buy it.

Oh My God... That was beautiful. I loved it. And the funny thing is I started reading Fallen a couple of days ago, and I didn't realize it was the sequel to this. Thanks so much for writing it!

Oh~ that was so heartwrenching beautiful I admit I cried quiet a bit trough the story *blush* but I love your writing and I'm going to read another storie from you!!

just finished the entire thing and it was beautiful, just beautiful.
I felt so sorry for Zayn in the end, cause he hurt so much and there was no hope at all for his love to be answerded.
In fact I felt torn the entire time while I was reading. You combined pain and love to an aching and bittersweet story that makes your insides churn while you're reading it, and still I was unable to stop.

nice story.

Darn you, Edana! (Okay, that was rude, but then...)

Your story was really beautiful, it had me up here in a pile of tears (er... Tissue, rather. Consumed a Kleenex tissue box already, sitting here for three hours.) There are very few writers who end their stories well when they have good beginnings, or start their stories well when they have sucky beginnings, and you're an author who balances this aspect--a great beginning and a great ending. Good job; I commend you!

Also, your characters have very good characterizations, and as such, their experiences were very humane (if 'human' is not the term to use). Despite the fact that they were supernatural, their actions, feelings, their thoughts--it's believable. I think that people exist like those characters you use. I also like how the characters just fit in, tie-in with the plot's story itself.

The wording is excellent. There were very few (if no) grammatical and spelling errors, as well as the fact that the conversations were not just words in quotations, but rather, real-live words... Flowery, beautiful words... And really, the flow it uses in a story? Incredible.

Your use of emotion here was great. I was impressed by the way that the characters experienced these--love, hate, desparation, pain, sadness... And it makes that person feel what the character is feeling for the story.

The use of the names in relation to the story was very creative, too. I liked that. It was also creative, the way that the quote from this particular vision was used in the real event, so as to reference (even if that was not your intention?)

Overall, I would say to you that you have this beautifully-written work archived here in FP, and I suppose that you deserve more credit. This story is beautiful, and whether it was a work of your imagination, or based from real-life experience, it was portrayed well. The fact about the angels and the demons existing was pretty cool, too. It moved me, inspired me to take my writing to a whole new level, and this became some sort of a guide for a n00b in writing such as myself (but I promise I won't steal!). This is a well-balanced story with all the elements mixed in there, and you know what? I won't be sick and tired of reading this--and your other stories--over and over again, and I won't be afraid to spread this. Why? Because despite its slashy-ish theme, this story deserves to be told.

With that said, thank you so much for making a story worth my time, and keep writing (since I see that this was dated all the way back to 2003!).

~idiotic-beans

Love this story. Beautifully written. There was a confusing part somewhere but I can't remember where now. It's something that the readers don't know but you and Eadoin both do, so I got kinda lost reading that bit. Anyway, I'm gonna read the sequel now, hopefully it will be as romantic as this one! Zayn deserves his own love story.

P.S. It's me again. I just wanted to say, you should have everything you've ever written published. Really.

This was stunning. Your story is so well written. The details, character developement, langauage -everything was pretty much perfect. I can't tell you how great it is to read something not littered with typos or horrific grammar.

I loved how you began each chapter and your descriptions were so lyrical. I almost cried reading this (actually I kinda did). It's cool how everyone's name had some deeper meaning.

There's a story on fictionpress by inkslinger (I think that's the author). It's called Rise of the Dawn and there's great fanart with it. I think you'll like it so if you haven't read it already, give it a try :)

aw it was so sweet! This story was written so beautifully. It real was an amazing story. And i totally cried on the last couple of chapters ;_; Anywho seriously this was a great story =DAnd im so happy that your doing another one in the series. -goes to read it- \m/.

Oh wow...I was a crying so hard during the last few chapters. It was written so beautifully ;_; I honestly have to say that this is probably the best angel/demon story I've ever read. I loved how Idande came back in the end, I'd probably still be crying if he didn't.I still can't pronounce their names properly though...blah..=P

You are fast becoming one of my favorite authors here on Fanfiction! This story was so good, I just couldn't wait to finish it and i'm going to delve right into the next one. You've given me the inspiration, through your incredible writing, to start in on my own first person story. I just couldn't get any inspiration to write it, but now I have it, thanks^_~

Wow...i've never read something so...so...beautiful! I am in awing shock...honestly...It was so...beautifully written! I was...lost in the story!! Wow, you're talented! If you ever publish this i am buying it!

~~Till next time!~~

damn, u had me crying like a baby! luved this story!

Wow. This story was AWESOME! It played on every emotion and even made me almost cry a couple times. I loved that even though there were several parts that were depressing, the ending as still happy. And I'm glad you brought Kit back. I felt really sorry for Marcell at that point, and Kit's too much fun to kill permanently! The idea of how the baby was born was really interesting, too. (I was wondering how Kit and Marcell were going to end up with a newborn...) Yeah, to sum it all up, I loved this story a LOT. So now I'm off to read the sequel ^_^ Despite how insane Zayn was in this story, I still liked him ^_^ Ttfn~

~*.Cat