brilliant

Depressing...but true in many ways...Great poem!

I must admit, I never expected anyone to add me to their favorites. All I write is pretty much something that can get your heart down about life. It means a lot to me that you added me to your favorites axctually. I'm glad somebody likes my work. Anyway, on with the review. I liked this very much. I think you are very talented and I will read more of your writings. Right now I'm in school, so I have to go to class. Until next time.

short, sweet, admirably written. excellent portrayal of a depressed teenager's hatred of his or her self; even species. good job.

u know, u sound suicidal... i mean, i know you're not, but to other pplz, well, they might get worried.

And I wonder if I'll ever belong too...does any one really belong, why did you get me started on philosophy? Great poem.

Oh! I really like this one... so powerful... what a strong statement! I liked the lines: *In this world of many worlds, Where fate comes in twists and curls.* That was great... again nice job with the rhyming! )

my heart is the deep end of the ocean too!

Short - sad. /

wow... that's good.

keep it comin'