|Reviews for Dead or just Unfeeling?|
| Gauy 6/12/03 . chapter 1
The title remind me of my poem 'Lost or Just Mislead.' But, it's about a whole different subject. Anyway, I feel like that sometimes, mostly when I'm with family... but I don't spend much time with them ... our interests have split
| The Crazy Cricket 10/14/02 . chapter 1
This poem is really sad...But it's good! Keep on writing!
| Rose Dark Thorn 9/19/02 . chapter 1
This is a very moving piecec I must say. I felt like that when I was younger as well. I still have a hard time showing emotions though. Until I found something that made it easier. Great poem. I think this is very interesting. It make you think if you know what I mean. I like the rhyme sceme as well.
| Jade6 5/20/02 . chapter 1
Nicely done... some interesting use of rhyming... great job! )
| Arbobug2 5/15/02 . chapter 1
that was very powerful, and true.
two thumbs way up!
| Daredee 5/14/02 . chapter 1
u no i luv it!
its very deep..and means something.
i like the story told by this poem
(i m using the story in my english assignment)
| seared flesh 5/13/02 . chapter 1
really good job...i love the last line! i know the feeling...wishing you could feel when you're so cold that nothing matters anymore and everything and everyone becomes a blur...I LUV this poem!
| Impressionist 5/13/02 . chapter 1
not bad...just a comment...maybe a pet peeve or something, but ener abbreviate words in a poem as you would in a casual email. (such as "u" instead of "you") it completely ruins the pome, because it sends you back into the real world. it also somewhat staunches the flow of the poem. other than that, I'm impressed. good job for a youngster. ;)
| TK Styles 5/12/02 . chapter 1
Nice poem, I like some of the rhymes. I don't think it's any weirder than my "Four Horsemen" poem. Thanks for the reviews. Keep up the good work and I await your next work. You have a whole lot of potential :). Peace.
| midnights shadow 5/11/02 . chapter 1
Very good poem. But...I hope you really don't want to be dead. Most things get better, or at least bearable with time...