love it. you know that is exactly what i feel and how i feel, that's what i'm searching for in life, oh go check out my fanfics, i have a couple of poems and various fics, leave a review so i know you've been there

That was a beautiful piece of writing. You're really creative for your age, I'm very impressed ^_^.

Again: WOW. Very emotional stuff you write and...its just amazing. Great song. Its full of emotion and mesa an relate to one particular line:

^ I’m falling deeper (deeper) into a black hole ^

YLG,
DS

Ek...this sounds like something Britney Spears might sing that leads to a number one hit or something -_-;;. 'Tis not an insult as you're quite good at song writing. It was clear, simple and touchy. Very nice.

Cool! I can imagine me singing it- wait, nevermind. I was. Rephrase. I can still see me singing it 5 seconds ago. I can imagine singing it as I open for my first concert. 11/10. Good job.

Hey this is a great song, the chorus is great, and the content of the song is briliant, it's really heartfelt, and also a dash of coldness, well done for a song well done, I hope to see more of your songs in the future, good luck.
I rate this song:9/10

Hey I'm just looking through here and this one caught my eye! It was good! I like it.....I really do...I was singing it LOL

That was cool! I can definaly get the message of the song clearly, unlike some songs on the radio that make no sense.

wow! i can imagine you singing it. it was really good

Wow. I can easily hear my radio station playing that so many times that I set my car on fire.
P.S.: That's not an insult to you or your song.

-MJ Banks

Lovely song! I love it! 5/5!