Sup! ShinigamiForever's not liking this teen angst trend we're starting, but o well! :P Yet another great poem! I know how it feels to be like this, Mendelssohn. And I especially liked:

"Alas, all immortals are drawn to mortals

Leading mortals to control immortals

And immortals, who cruel Fate plays upon,

Loses their immortality.

A mortal they become."

Keep it up!

Over & out,

Wufei

Hi! It was a great poem. Straight to the point and revealing. The true meaning was not hid behind a cloak of fancy language. Instead, it is one of the only poems I've read that shows the delicate and utterly vulnerable inside.

Wow. I love this! So angsty, it's great! It reminds me of some people I know...keep writing, please!

Ardnaxela

P.S. Gosh, more people should readthe original poetry, it's often very good!