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| revealed 2005-03-07 ch 1,  | abuseThe rhythm of this makes it seem so happy and light, while the words are so serious, it's a really good combination. You have such a nice style, I've enjoyed every thing of your's I've read, and I think I've read most of it. Your writing is really inspiring in an odd sort of way. Anyways, it's awesome and I hope things are going better for you. |
| Mista Mugs 2004-08-21 ch 1, | abuseQuite potent. I rather enjoyed this poem. The imagery was intense, and the style was nice. Well done. ~Magnus |
| ROMAN EMPEROR 2004-07-10 ch 1, | abuseI have you as one of my fav. poets, thats enough said , i have read much of your work. I really enjoy reading all of them |
| Phoebs 2004-06-26 ch 1, | abuseAlmost gave me the creeps (if I wasn't so into such type of writings). Ah...nice description once again. Very dark..and suicidal. Love the way you incorporate rhyming in your poems. It gives the poems a greater...expression. |
| little red line 2004-02-24 ch 1, | abuse...why do I think of the blair witch when I read this?God,this is great.Write more.This has gotta be your best one.I love it *prints* |
| Scarlet Starfire 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh, out of the ones i've read so far I love this one the most. It almost made me cry(the last part) even though I doubt that's what you're really going for, but I totally relate and I love it so much. |
| Roadside Dryer 2003-12-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat Job! I loved it. |
| DIEDELETED 2003-11-03 ch 1, | abuseLove it! Whats up with the funky lettering though? Tehe |
| Radio-active Potato 2003-10-12 ch 1, | abuseYour poetry is so amazingly wicked yet beautiful at the same time. TEACH ME! lol, j/k, keep up the good work. |
| pleasecometrue 2003-07-20 ch 1, | abusewow... that was amazing, I love it! Definitly going on favorites! |
| Loganberry 2003-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was excellent. It's reminiscent of a lot of the poems you see in the "Angst" category, except that this one actually scans. "We'll build a haven / Out of Hell" is a wonderful part. Again, well done. |
| Impressionist 2002-09-21 ch 1, | abuseperfection...that's what I have to say. The image you paint here is extremely vivid and beautiful. If Beautiful can be applied to hell. I'm not sure. maybe...ish...O_o |
| Werecat99 2002-08-08 ch 1, | abuseVery strong images that leave a strange aftertaste. I'm sure they'll stick in my head for some time, but I really liked it. |
| Relena Peace 2002-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was an intensly deep poem. But it shines with hope through the cracks of it. At least that's something that I got out of it. I don't know, I could be wrong. Nice poem. I really liked the ryme scheme. It seemed to come easly. Not really forced. |
| tazara 2002-05-29 ch 1, | abusethat is deep- you have a good mind! |