The rhythm of this makes it seem so happy and light, while the words are so serious, it's a really good combination. You have such a nice style, I've enjoyed every thing of your's I've read, and I think I've read most of it. Your writing is really inspiring in an odd sort of way. Anyways, it's awesome and I hope things are going better for you.

Quite potent. I rather enjoyed this poem.
The imagery was intense, and the style was nice.
Well done.
~Magnus

I have you as one of my fav. poets, thats enough said , i have read much of your work. I really enjoy reading all of them

Almost gave me the creeps (if I wasn't so into such type of writings). Ah...nice description once again. Very dark..and suicidal. Love the way you incorporate rhyming in your poems. It gives the poems a greater...expression.

...why do I think of the blair witch when I read this?God,this is great.Write more.This has gotta be your best one.I love it *prints*

Oh my gosh, out of the ones i've read so far I love this one the most. It almost made me cry(the last part) even though I doubt that's what you're really going for, but I totally relate and I love it so much.

Great Job! I loved it.

Love it! Whats up with the funky lettering though? Tehe

Your poetry is so amazingly wicked yet beautiful at the same time. TEACH ME! lol, j/k, keep up the good work.

wow... that was amazing, I love it! Definitly going on favorites!

I thought this was excellent. It's reminiscent of a lot of the poems you see in the "Angst" category, except that this one actually scans. "We'll build a haven / Out of Hell" is a wonderful part. Again, well done.

perfection...that's what I have to say. The image you paint here is extremely vivid and beautiful. If Beautiful can be applied to hell. I'm not sure. maybe...ish...O_o

Very strong images that leave a strange aftertaste. I'm sure they'll stick in my head for some time, but I really liked it.

That was an intensly deep poem. But it shines with hope through the cracks of it. At least that's something that I got out of it. I don't know, I could be wrong. Nice poem. I really liked the ryme scheme. It seemed to come easly. Not really forced.

that is deep- you have a good mind!