hey this chapter is great... hope you put up another one soon. what can i say? i have this pirate-phase right now and i'm loving everything pirate-y. so obviously i just HAD to read your story, and i was apleasently surprised it surtanly has the potentian to be a great story (can't say it's a great story now cause i've only read first chapter, but it's really really good!) i hope you will continue... and soon... i wanna know what happens so keep writing

*cough* check out my story The Dragon Diamonds if ya want *cough-need-reviews-cough* hehehe, sorry, i just had to advertise a little, forgive me :D

but all in all: GOOD JOB!

Captain Chicken the 3rd

So far, so very intriuging. I am waiting your next installment before making any decisions, MJ; there's so much you could do with this. D

Nice story MJ. This could turn out to be really interesting, so I'll be waiting for the next chapters. The story line seems to flow really well, I could learn from your writing.

Arrivederci!

-Tigra-

Excelent story. I really enjoyed it and I hope you continue with it. I would love to hear what happens next.

hehe ! Im the first reviewer! wai! anyway, i like your story a lot keep it up!