 Laleanen 2002-09-19 . chapter 1aww! :) Vivid imagery! good job. |
 Croix 2002-07-21 . chapter 1Awww! You think of me! I feel so special! ::gets nudged by TaZ as she whispers something in her ear:: Oh. So you think of Jonathon! LOL j/k. PLEASE DON'T HIT ME! ::ducks flying objects:: I'll shrink away now.... eheh. |
 Angelfire321 2002-05-16 . chapter 1good job, but u said ur one of the only junior highers who write poetry here, im in sixth grade . . .so. . . otherwise great!!! Keep writing. |
 Harriet Weasley 2002-05-16 . chapter 1Hey, Pansy, GREAT! I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE!! |
 I Luv Me1 2002-05-16 . chapter 1awwwwwwwww...*sniff*...That was great! Very inspiring! Beautifully written! You should be proud of this one, I thought it was great! I didn't know you were poet, but bravo, you did great! Nice job!
luvs,
Anna |