lol...wow can u believe i havnt read this yet? LOL
this is very good...for your 6th grade style anyway, lol...you've really improved over the past two years that your account's been up here...lol, i think mine is 2 years old in june...time really passes by, huh?
wow, im very off topic...anyway, its a really good story, good ideas and very original

That was a great story. Good job

this is really good. sad but really good

~claps~ how sweet

this is beautiful and so sad in the beginning.