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| aleppine 2003-07-15 ch 1,  | abuse'A looking glass of infinite proportions.' - brilliant. To be honest, I am so tired right now that there's ins't enough of my brain present with me to properly think that through. But I liked it all the same. Good choice of wording. |
| promiscuous girl 2003-04-27 ch 1, | abuseLoved your POV on this. It seemed really out of the ordinary, though I have see several poems on the concept of mirrors and metaphors, but yours really stood out. Your philsophy in your writing is really just... wow! I think that word suits everything you write in one simple word. Loved it, once again. Sugar Cookies and Whipped Cream -- Lianna |
| Cassie Metallium1 2003-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was awesome. Just...wow...~blinks~ I'm speechless. That was such a cool poem. Flawless talent. Keep up the awesome work! |
| Aesthete 2003-04-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful...i love the imagery used by you...and being a lover of the English language, i feel delighted to see someone make such excellent use of words...it's more like u play with words...and i think that's fascinating...getting back to the poem...it's really unusual concept and it's great to see that our illusory world still houses people that aren't shallow and are able to actually ponder upon our existence but conclusively...i also think that u are a very interesting person...u are fully right in asserting yourself and standing up for what u live by...n believe me those who believe otherwise and flame u for that really stink...it just proves how narrow-minded people can be...n u need not give a damn about such people cause they're just not worth it...keep writing and living like like u want...like yourself... |
| valpincon 2002-11-10 ch 1, | abusethat is wonderful...strange, thoughtful, dark and very very visual... really beautiful! |
| Thyra 2002-09-27 ch 1, | abuseMirrors are such a concept that I love to play with, and the metaphors could go on forever... murky, clear... I love the word visage.. I like to see it used correctly. Another philosophy that I can applaude you for articulating so beautifully... cheers. |
| Andromeda 2002-08-17 ch 1, | abuseThis one makes ya think a little! I actually had to go back and read it a couple of times to make sure I understood it. I think it's wonderful! I also want to thank you for reviewing a few of my poems and for your kind words. I've never been compared to a modern shakespeare before, and I'm very flattered (and now i'm back in the swing of things with my new poem i just posted late last night) So thank you so much, it means a lot to me! Keep up the great work! |
| Familiar Alien 2002-05-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat, it's good to see you putting more thought provoking material. |
| Moonshadow3 2002-05-17 ch 1, | abusewicked! |
| Ellerfru 2002-05-16 ch 1, | abusegood poem |