That was amazing! Just an amazing story... Wow. I really, really like it!

THis is the kind of stuff that happens when you're hiding dark ugly stuff, give a chance to come out and you can kiss your sanity goodbye. This story would have described me 3 years back if given the chance. Thank God it didn't.

This story is a beautiful statement about the power of love to overcome the darkest of human experiences... I'm dubious as to the realism of this story, but that's just 'cause I'm a cynical b*tch, and has nothing to do with your considerable talent for prose. Good work; I look forward to more complete stories from you.

its really good, very dramatic which makes the story more intensifying.
i cut myself, but not because if that. they way you describe everythign makes it very real. its very good

that're really good! it's different a little from what i read of yours earlier (haven't been around here in months) and i think i like it better. good luck on exams. we have some, placement for high school. but they aren't too hard or long.

i got published! by creative communications. just one poem: "rememberer". i'm still pretty happy though. it's a start.

r!va

Oh. my. God. This was ... wow. just... wow. I like it. Need I say more?

Is that why people cut themselves? Good scene.