eww... love. I hate that word. Not bad. Not bad at all.

i love you so much, if i were a lesbian, i would marry you. ...i might marry you anyway. you are a genius.

One word: WOW.

Hm.. that one made me think... Thought provokation is a good thing in poetry, though.. You did well with the stimili, and I believe the wording was perfect for the ideas you're trying to implant... Well done.