This is sad. I don't know why, but I must add it to my favorite storys list!

Very discriptive. Very good use of words. :) Please look at my work? ^^

I am reading your first one last
(and the last shall become first)
and I can see the improvement by going backwards.

Like .. a typo! ONE typo -- in 7 poems? Woah (bows down and grovles at your feet). The sodier sighs -- what is a sodier?
(struck by lightening for my insolence) - ow!

I am glad you put in all your poems. Gives us a chance to see the progression of your craft and voice. Your voice gets better after this.

(p.s. why do some poems go in as stanzas, but other refuse?)

Hah, you know me!! ^_^ What can I say? Of all your peoms, this is my favorite. Write more!

[sits]

[stares]

[cannot take eyes from screen]

wow...

I remember seeing this poem when we had classes together but I never really understood it until I barely ever got to see you. But it waves back and forth between the feelings of lonliness and pain to hope of a new future, but it falls back and forth between the two contrasting emotons.

Great poem!! I'm surprised more people haven't reviewed it. I especially like the line "A crested wave breaks on the beach". Nice job!