Ah, sorry, the unsigned review is mine...for some reason I forgot to sign in and didn't realize it :)

Well-written. Tho', admittedly, not my favorite of yours, it is still very well done, and you carried off the rhyme-scheme wonderfully, not making it sound forced or anything.

Beautifully done! The form fit the poem well - or the poem fit the form, whichever. Either way, it flowed wonderfully. The imagery...outstanding job, I especially enjoyed the last. Wow.