^_^ yet another good fic.!

Wow. Can yousa do anything less than great and true? No? Didn't think so. My fav line is:

^ Life is just so confusing to you
Too many ups and downs
They tell you to speak what’s on you mind
But when you do, they only frown ^

Cause its so true! Whenever you try and say something they immediately come out and judge you and its so f***ed up. Just felt like getting that out and in case mesa didn't make it clear: great song.

YLG,
DS

aw, this was so good. yeah, being a teenager sux, and i couldn't write a song if my life depened on it. thanx for reading and reviewing my holden story. keep writing songs.

great song keep wrighting if you get time review some of my stuff

Bwhahaha! Angst! Now THIS is my category. Ahem, okay, I liked this as well. Yet again it's very simple but has a deep meaning. Excellent!

very powerful...

W... wow... ~is shocked by the um... good... ness... of this poem~ ~Blinks~ WOW!! Despite it has suicidal inclinations, this song/poem thingy was really great! I almost cried. I'm a "teenager" - I HATE IT!! I'm so dang moody all the time!!!! ^_^** Not to mention I think I'm in loooove... ~swoons, then slapps herself~ COUGHCOUGH anywho. This song would make good. The rhythm I can very well imagine, and you did an excellent job... I haven't even ATTEMPTED a song yet, just about 30 poems, heheh. ^_^** Great stuff!! I especially like the last stanza thingy. Wonderful pattern...

P.S. PICCOLO RUUULEEES!!!!

Hey this song is great, I like how you've structured it, and the flow of the song feels like there's a lot of up's and down's fitting in with the theme of this song, I like the part in particular when you say
"staring at your reflection
Watching as you cry
All you want is to hear the thruth
Don't wanna hear on more lie"
Its a great piece of work, it has that feeling to it, I just can't put it to words, well done.
I rate this song:8.6/10