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Reviews For: The Elements
Jani Rieme 2005-03-12 . chapter 1
Beautiful, all of them. The kind of thing you read to make you think of lovely summer days when the sun is shining and a cool wind blowing, or, in the case of Fire, when it's the middle of winter, there's lovely snowfall outside, and there's just enough chill in the air to make you appreciate the warmth of the flames. But I wonder what you would write if you wrote another quartet, but this one entailing the dangerous side of the elements?
Flipinchicago 2002-05-23 . chapter 1
mmmm continue writting!!
Add some other elements, even though they aren't part of the original Four...

Like .... Light, Thunder, Darkness, and ya know :-D just a couple suggestions.
Magdalen 2002-05-23 . chapter 1
You are incredibly talented. I really like these haikus a lot and that you have preserved the original format. Very good.
Newkirk's Heroes 2002-05-22 . chapter 1
Wonderful! I love these...very well done (I'm German too ^-^). Very nicely written.
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