Like all of your city poems, a way to travel out of the mundane and into something far reaching. Great work, and I am reduced to using adjectives I've already used. *whine* I can't find the words!

wow, this really reminds me of wallace steven's work - i'm not too sure if you've ever read his works or have been influenced by them, but i consider him to be one of the greatest poets ever! this is lovely.