Gold. Scans much better. Is that "1" supposed to be there in the fourth line, though? I can't work out what it's for.

Wow! really nice. And it's gold by the way.

oh crap. this poem isn't the right one, everyone...i don't know what happened. it disappeared and i don't know if i have a saved copy...

In my opinion, it should be gold.

Why? to keep consistent with silver. Golden would go with "silvery." But that's just my opinion. I'm not a linguistics major

but wait...no, u changed it! i'm so confuzzled...

i think gold is fine. i luv ur writing, keep it up ^_~

lolz, that 1 line wuz from Savage Garden. hehe. that wuz a great poem, and many of the questions u asked, i have no answer 2. maybe in time, my dear, in time...

hiiiiii. just wanted to say i liked this poem. i'm sorry i haven't reviewed any of your poems in a while. i love your writing....it's just life calls. hehe. *huggies* keep writing. things will get better! :D you got a good talent here. :D:D:D and thanks for reviewing me.

oooo, pretty poem chammie!! so many questions that we all ask ourselves everyday, pretty! btw, it's fooki

If you answer the last question, then everything else is answered. If people stop becoming so inquisitive, then they'll stop asking why. Then again, why would they ever do that?

Poor Sammi!!! May I have the honor of answering all your why's?? Maybe instead of asking so many why's, you can just trust that if you cast all your burdens onto Him, they're safe in His hands. You know...Prov. 3: 5+6. Anyways, just want you to know that I'll always be there if you really are seeking answers... Charlene and God loves you darling!!:) :) :)
I like your writing:)

good poem chammie!!! so many questions...
feel better soon!! bunnert...hehe