I REALLY like this story and i've decided to check it regularly.

Kudo's

-Layah

I am really hopeing that you will add the next chapter. This is definitely the kind of story I love to read. I can relate to so many of the details. Awesome writing.

I like. No, I think I love. You're a wonderful writer. I love your style. I can't wait to read more!

You simply MUST write more! This story is amazingly well done!

Very nice, I love the way you write :D please continue _

wow, i totally love this story, dam good, nice chapter lengths, great writting style and great plot!

hey, sounds interesting! nice first chapter defiantly got me head ova heels in love wit it! ay' need to read more cya!

It's ok

Strange! Write more soon!

Amazing. very, very amazing. both the characters seemed very real, as did the situation. I loved the way you set the story out, and the anger and defiance that it seemed so full off. It was really brilliant. I hope you write some more.

Cool story. I already love it. The girls are great, I love the weird people, especially Jacky (she reminds me myself a bit although I'm not an amazing artist and I'm not so gothic.) Hope is cool too, I like her world. Will you update

soon? I'd like to see how they are befriending. That's all for now!

Hiddy-ho! This is great! I really like the way that you have portrayed Jackie and Hope. I think Hope is hilarious with the way she thinks. I don't really like Jackie's mom though...but I guess that's what you wanted, ne? I think that maybe it should be Hope that is seeing the shrink,eh? Anyways this is some great stuff, I hope you update soon.

BAI BAI

I adore this story. It’s so… real, somehow. At the same time as being completely unreal, of course. It’s a marvelous contrast. It’s well-written, the characters are well-presented, and it’s nice to read. And I LOVE Jackie’s conversation with the shrink.

:::cheers::: What a great chapter! I don't like Jackie's mother very much. :::Growls::: But I can't wait for the next chapter!

In the meantime, I'm going to go ahead and edit these 3 chapters, then send them to you. I hope you don't mind?

I very much like Hope, weird though she may be. And I feel very sorry for poor Jackie.

:::scampers off to read the next chapter:::