Hey!!
Remember me? It's been a really long long long long long long long long long long long WHILE!!
How you been? ZOMG! The last review was back in '07?!
Have you finished this story yet? Or are you planning to leave it hanging-- please don't! it's just too good!

darn it. Who was watching them

lol the short girl is funny

Darn..I know how she feels..I'm close to tears. This story is starting out really good

*squeals*

You came back after... a long time! Wow! Welcome back! And I am starting to feel sorry for Yurana... she seems more understandable now somehow.

This is really good. I hope you update soon. It's really good.

Much love,Aero

Yay! you've finally updated... Abit of a cliffhanger there-_- the suspense...but anyway great chapter...love it..till the next chapter, Ja~Sy-chan

I enjoy your story, but it is a bit cliched, and the grammer is not getting any better.

I'm guessing the person watching from the shadows is Chesi.

I liked Chesi. Cute little girl reminded me of a character from Ceres: Celestial Legend.

I still see alot of errors-repeated information, unnecessary words, etc. I think you might need to find a BETA to help you. But, I enjoy the story line!

That was an interesting beginning, although I did see many grammatical errors, and flawed sentence structures.

Kawaii! Wonderful!

Very Nice! I like the standing "ranks" it amkes it seem more believable... Very nice^_^

Okay chapter, but since Chesi's short and still sixteen, would she really pull on someone's skirt? and remember when you use dialogue, you start a new paragraph when the speaker changes. Just to spare the confusion.

That's so messed. WHy would anyone want to be with a guy like that and hit girls? and how come the teacher didn't do anything about it? this has to be and old school type for them to allow stuff like that cuz violence in the classroom? you serious?if they have really rich kids, they have to have a lot of security or something. if not, you should have explained that, or given a little to the ramblings of a dumbfounded teacher. anyhoo, i think this was a pretty good chappie, just a bit more detail is all. anyhoo... i'll keep reading! :P

ek! need update!