Very kewl!I loved the way that you wrote it all.Not really well said by my self but nice poem.
Could you maybe read and review my origonal vampire novel?Thanks if you can and good luck with your own riting.

it's a great poem karisma, but where's the iambic pertameter? Oh well, i guess it doesn't really matter because my sonnet wasn't much better! Write more! and try and figure out who I am karisma... mwahahaha...

I write poetry, but not like that!! I wish I could but i have problem with words, but I'm learning, I really enjoyed that!! : ) : )

wanna hear something great from a fellow author (love the pen name by the way-) i also have a poem about the intertwinement of the writer, their soul, and their work- soul out poured. 'cept i wrote it so long ago- but it still applies.

TO

I like this too. Another to the favs list. Gosh, all of your poems are so airy, not in a air-head way, but a naturally rhyming way, like they flowed so smoothly from your soul onto the paper, or computer in this case.

*blinks rapidly*

I can really see why you'd win third place...but the other people that won 1st and second had to be hella good to beat this. It was a truely wonderfully done poem.

I don't really review poetry that well...it's hard to tell you the truth, hehe. You can't criticize someone's feelings, thoughts, emotions, or personal experiences... So yeah...

Anyway, you really do create an atmosphere. Your rhyming in each stanza also runs very smoothly. There are no blemishes, no stops or stumbles. It just flows very nicely. I love your choice of words for your ryhming as well. Very nice.

Awesome! I could *never* some up with something so good! Well, I guess I know now why it won!