good poem...it's like that feeling when you're just about to fall asleep

sad....and quiet like....just like a bus ride when a person is off in their own world....unnoticed by the bustle of those around them...

New York City. Does this have anything to do with the attacks? I'm not sure how I feel about this piece of writing.

blah I'm bored. Big word, myriad. What does it mean? Otherwise very good.

nice poem. It sorta sounds like the St. Nicholas story. I can't put my finger on the title. Try to make it rhyme. it may get a different feel. Its really good though. I noticed that you used myraid. Ergh! an SAT word!!! STOPP!!!! hehe

Cool. Thanx for the reviews and the e-mail! I really appreciate it.

i dunno if its just me but this poem is the same as the other one "why"..hmm...confuzed :l

gold
very prettiful poem, sammiecham

Gold is grammatically correct.