I liked it! And...I know that it was supposed to be a short story, but...sequel? *kawaii grin* Please, please, please write more!! *starry eyes* Wonderful story, by the way! *glomps* Anyway, it's MUCH better than my yaoi fics. *kicks said fics* >.

Wow!!!!! That was really good!!! And you know what, who cares about if it's hinting towards being yaoi? It's still a great story.

Excellent writing and character interaction! You were descriptive without being boring (I chronically describe and bore my readers to death). Also, a very well done yaoi, most are lame or disgusting, and seem unrealistic. I definately want to see some more! An I would appreciate some reviews myself *evil self-plug, I know*. ^_~