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Breath Caught Holding 2009-04-27 . chapter 2
Meh. The story was okay. I love do to see a prepy chearleader get screwed.
Zeva 2006-03-16 . chapter 2
*laughing maniacally* Ha!! Crashing parties sounds like such fun. ^_^ And methinks it wasn't a girl Chris was kissing, but a guy? Myabe? *shrug* I dunno.

*puppy face* Update? Pwease?
Zeva 2006-03-16 . chapter 1
Hahaha...Very nice start. ^_^ I like Malkom's cynicism. How he's all, "She's fake this and shallow that..." It made me smile, because there really are so many people like that - shallow and fake.

Onwards to the next chappie!!
Lolita SM Morbid 2005-05-18 . chapter 2
There are a bit too many characters for my taste, and I'm not sure what's supposed to be happening, so I'm not exactly getting into it. I'll definitely read more when you update, though.
Bronwynne 2004-11-06 . chapter 2
BERN!
UPDATE THIS! NOW!
*puppy eyes*
Please? PLEASE?
I luff you...
Bronwynne 2004-11-06 . chapter 1
Bern, you better get off your kiester and write more of this one. My baseball bat and I will NOT be denied!!
DH 2003-12-01 . chapter 2
Hey DCJ! I wanted to review your story so you know I liked it. I LOVE the gatecrashing. It makes me wish I had done that to the popular squad in highschool, oh well. I suppose I'll just have to let my future children do that...
Xi 2003-08-09 . chapter 2
i was bored. so i read this... and its good... so why don't you just continue? since, i enjoy reading about people crashing cheerleaders parties... its fun to read *wink*
yea, so... continue...
-MandaZ
P-chan 2003-05-11 . chapter 2
Ya outta add some more to this, if the
inspiration's still there. Personally, i like
it. im pretty curiose as to whats goona
go wrong fer someone next. ;) lol well,
i hope ya do add some, but if ya dont; ya
dont.
hupsoonheng 2003-03-01 . chapter 2
Mrow! Please, please continue this! If not for the sake of the readers then at least write it.for.fun? Please? I really wanna read more of this! ^^

~Rura
Switch 2003-01-04 . chapter 2
Dear God, Brittany's a **. I can guarantee that I can get you a ton of reviewers if you kill her off. The more gruesome, the better. I love the story, though. Can't wait to hear more about this "girl" Chris was sucking face with. ^_~ Update soon please!!
LostC 2002-12-07 . chapter 2
em... not exactly getting this. too many characters are making my head spin. where's the slash? who's the main chara? i hope it becomes clearer as you go along... have you updated lately? please do, it's a good story.
Bienfoy 2002-11-16 . chapter 2
cooool, i'm so hoping that malkom and chris are together*grins*great set of char's!
PaLiNdRoMe 2002-11-07 . chapter 1
the popularity thing's a bit exaggerated, but i can understand why.. i hope you keep writing, its fun to read -g-
Ginny3 2002-11-07 . chapter 2
YO THIS STORY IS GREAT KEEP WRIGHTING I LIKE IT DESCRIBES WHAT ME AND MY B.F WENT THROUGH BEFORE HA STARTED **
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