Wow. I have seen The Last Unicorn and heard the song. I have to say Ilove you view of it. The words and the imagery they provoke are beautiful. The way the tale goes reminds me of the story of Beloved in The Ubicorn Chronicles by Bruce Coville. In the fact that a pure maiden was used as bait for the unicorn so that the hunter could kill it. Also a bit like the movie Legend. Keep up your wonderful work. I can't wait to red more.

This is sad, but a nice piece of poetry. Nice twist to the story. Good job!

~ CoolBeans18s

"And it seems
Like all is dying
And would leave the
World to morn

In the distance hear the laughter of the last Unicorn - I'm alive
I'm alive."

Nice twist on the story. Very sad, but good just the same.

~Acorna~

Wow. I've read Peter Beagle's Last Unicorn, and I love both it and the Unicorn's Sonata, and I think that this expresses it perfectly. Nice job. Cheers,
~*~*~*~Michelle*~*~*~

that is so sad! *sniff* *sob* *sniff*

REVIEW!!! OR ELSE. Nameless one? Grace, is that you?

Very good, i hope you write more, the movie was lacking a little bit, but maybe this poem is not....... Grace!!!!!

Sad....

Good poem tho'...Keep writin' feathered one.

that is a very good poem
i have never herd a poem like that about a unicorn
usally they are "pretty" and "nice"
and they always have happy ending
but this was cool

*tear* have I ever mentioned how much I like that poem? Hmm...if I put a coyright on it should I post TTOSBT up here so people know what we are talking about?

~Dragon

That's very sad and well written. 5 stars. Have you read the book too? I love one of the other songs in the film - 'Walking Man's Road'. Great, isn't it? (Book, film, song).

Great poem! I loved it when the unicorn's eyes were described and the description of it as a whole. Sad that it had to die, but I like the imagery. Nice job!