that's rather sad, and i can fully relate. I like the rhythm and rhyme... the last 4 lines really stuck in my head.

*wince*
Sentiment understood completely. I wish I could write poetry. My emotions tend to reflect a little bit in my writing, but not much. At least I don't think so. Mayne other people can see more. *shrug*

How strongly this poem reminds me of a person I know back then. It was lonely feeling, especially for that person of his/her type.

Beautiful yet painful poem. Man how the heck those weird symbols popped in...

This is an amazingly fantastic spectacutal heart-felt powerful and emotive poem. You put your feelings across so well and I can relate to you coz I feel the same about lovey-dovey stuff. EUGH! Hate it but want to feel some of my own! Patience is a virtue though. Sure you'll find love someday! Chin up! ~Delusional Happiness~

That was sad, but undeniably beautiful. Been there, felt that... And I certainly loved that slow descend from bitternass to hatred. Good word.

i can totally relate, blokes are a nightmare but, unfortunatly we need them.

** brillant poem

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Wow. Never thought I'd see any work from you on fp. *shrugs* Anyways, I've always liked this poem and it basically sums up everything that comes with that feeling. So beautiful and very sad at the same time. I'm gonna go cry now.

Ohmygawd. ;.; Beautiful. That almost precisely captures the way I feel, too! To all the people whose hearts belong to no one, I hope you find love soon! ::Throws chocolate hearts around.::