Nice! I love this dark and depressing stuff. It's just more realistic. However, to be entirely honest this probably isn't one of your better works.

ooooooh dark and wonderful, scary.
and to the reviewer who said the usa would never die- my friend, all empires fall.

I don't know what to say...it's that good and deep. Whatever I will say will not be good enough...hmmm...I know all too well how you feel. This poem describes my feelings exactly how I could write them. Great poem!

That made me want to go and cage wild animals for after the holocaust. Good work! But USA will never die!