I love the last two lines. Nice poem.
Melanie

hehe! Nice. A very quaint piece.

Wow. Sarendiputis. I like this. It's short and sweet, and has a gentleness to it. Also, I just love jade. (just ask Nymphean). Every nice.

Oh my god! I'm ... speechless.
"How does one laugh like the Universe?"
This is just such a strange and unique idea ... it's wonderful. It's not often that something catches me off guard like, that, but I have a feeling that that line is going to be going round my head for a while. For some strange reason, this poem has really got to me!
Thank you!

I love this

Hmm. Really makes one think. :)

lol, cute.

Actual philisophical poem. I really like this as well, very good. You have talent. I'm going to reread this again. :)

so cute. reminds me of someone I know, but I can't remember.

Why are you only wearing one ering?
I dunno