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Akemi Murase 2008-03-28 ch 14,	abuseThat was one of the greatest stories I've ever read. Bravo!
japanera 2007-04-07 ch 1, anon.	abuse,..err,..hi again,..i really think this story is,..wat u col it,..deep,..enweiz,..iwil juz continue 2 read,...
RomanticSoul 2007-03-16 ch 1,	abuseSO BLOODY GOOD!
Cariwyn 2006-03-27 ch 2,	abuseAlmost forgot to review because I was so eager to get to the next chapter. Don't hate me for not saying anything else...I want to read! Okay, so I'll take a minute. Justin seems...sure, egotistical. I'm not sure whether he's, and I don't like this word, "real" or not. But Jamal seems great. That's all for now. On to reading...
Cariwyn 2006-03-27 ch 1,	abuseHey. Alright, so you said that this is one of your most underreviewed stories. So I'm reading and reviewing, baby. Okay, so, as always, there's not much that I can say after a first chapter. I assume that any questions I have (ages, for example) will be answered in the next chapters. So, all I can say is that I like it. I feel like I've been saying that for every chapter I've reviewed, but it's true. Knowing someone with cancer is absolutely horrible. My grandpa died two months ago from prostate cancer, so I know what it's like. I feel for Emily. And Jamal and his family. Hm...on a more positive note, I can't wait to click the arrow button and keep reading.
foamyfan15010 2005-05-26 ch 14, anon.	abuseOh, what a sweet, sad story. I got your review for my story, and I decided to check out yours just for the hell of it. I'm so glad I did, because you're a very talented writer. You made me cry! lol I love the relationship between Jamal and Emily, very poignant. Your character development is excellent, I look forward to reading more from you. Great job. :o)
Sorceress of Light and Dark 2005-05-05 ch 14,	abuseO... Depressing. I would have liked it better if Jamal had lived, but I'm sure you get that a lot. I'm assuming you've seen the movie "A Walk To Remember?" Kind of like this- but there's no second guy... And it's the main female character that's sick, not the guy... Oh well. Despite the rather sad ending, it's a great story.
Bright Indian stars 2004-05-18 ch 2, anon.	abuseheheh nice story but funny thing is, my last name's jamal so yeah... it's good though
forgotton1 2004-05-15 ch 14,	abuseAgain one of your stories blows me away...even though the ending was sad, I couldn't help but think of how...beautiful this was. Chapter 14 made me cry when she read that letter from Jamal... i know what it feels like to lose a best friend and somebody you know to death. keep writing!
brownbear 2004-04-20 ch 14,	abuseThis story was so good! But it was really sad, and normally I don't like sad endings, but I'll make an exception. ;) I honestly thought that Jamal and Emily should have gotten together instead of Justin and Emily. I just liked Jamal better! At first I was confused in the beginning, I kept thinking that he got better until they had to go to work. Then I realized that it was a big flashback. I like flashbacks, and I think it was cool how you did it. :) b.b
lunietoonz 2004-03-25 ch 14, anon.	abuseTHAT WAS SO MESSED UP! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE HIM DIE FOR? TEAR NOW YOU HAVE ME OVER HERE IN TEARS. I LIKED JAMAL AND THEY WOULD HAVE MADE SUCH A CUTE COUPLE. BUT I GUESS IT HAD TO HAPPEN RIGHT! WELL THIS WAS A REALLY GOOD AND SAD STORY. WRITE MORE LIKE IT. IT WAS REALLY GOOD. ~TOONZ~
Farandole 2004-03-19 ch 14,	abuseoh my gosh, that was way sad. Kill him off why doncha? sheesh. I'm going to miss jamal. He seemed so real, as well and justin and emily. i feel like crying. u really do have a girft with words. like i said before, i'll be sure to pick up a copy when u publish this, or any other book. Was any of this true though? It seems honest and 'from the heart' to me, but you can never be sure...
Farandole 2004-03-19 ch 10,	abuseomg, i can so relate. My dad wouldn't even tell me. My mom had to do the dirty work for him-about a month after they had been divorced. Every time they would go to court, they said they were out on a date, and i'd be left with a babysitter. The next thing i knew, me and my mom were packed up and off to america. My dad's still in thailand.
annchick1273 2004-03-06 ch 14,	abuseright now i'm crying. wow, such a great story that deserves more reviews. once again, great job.
Midnight Owl 2004-02-28 ch 14,	abuseoh my god, this was so sad. seriously, i was damn near crying. your writing style here wasn't as good as "finding religion" but this was amazing, nonetheless. keep up the super work and i'm off to read more of your stuff.

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