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| - RomanticallyCliche - 2008-05-23 ch 21,  | abusei liked it! |
| PurpleMango2010 2008-02-06 ch 21, | abuseI loved it! |
| cherrypiesizzle 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseawesome. |
| shatteringxshadows 2007-10-30 ch 3, | abuseNice story, by the way, on Chapter three, almost to the end, it says Jake was talking on the phone. Don't know if you did that on purpose or something. |
| anitsirK 2007-08-20 ch 21, | abuseHahaha...real cute. :D A very lighthearted story and I rather enjoyed reading it. Haha, though, you got some gramatical errors and you referred to Jared as "Eric" and "Jonah" in that order in twom different chapters. Haha, just thought you should know. Kk, tah-tah, and good luck w/ writing! :D |
| MelGrl 2007-07-30 ch 21, | abuseAww, this was too cute. I like the parts where Hailey pulled the pranks. >_< Keep on writing! |
| britty-tt 2006-11-05 ch 21, | abusehahahah Loved it! It was kind of cliche for your stories but i love cliche so i really enjoyed it. Once again I am thanking you for writing a story that gave me much enjoyment to read. You must think I am obsessed with you by now...no need to get scared IM OBSESSED WITH YOUR WRITING! All of your stories are so well written...wait they r brilliantly written. I hope some day my writing will be as accomplished as yours. |
| FuzzyGrapes 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abuseI really, really like this story! ::*reads on*:: |
| cherrypiesizzle 2006-05-08 ch 21, | abuseWOW. Good story...VERY good story. |
| Alenor 2006-02-09 ch 21, | abuseaw that's a great story. i love it. cya later. |
| Dirty Secret 2005-11-07 ch 21, | abuseThis story is fantastically written. Absolutely magical. Perfect. Splendid. ;) |
| Riku E. Fallon 2005-07-01 ch 21, | abuseYay for cute stories! *cackles* Rachael got her due... hehehe, serves her right. I liked Skye a lot, as well as Jared (of course) and Hailey as well. She's an impatient character, always on the move. I like that. Thanks, I enjoyed reading it. |
| Nyte Tym Starr 2005-05-21 ch 21, | abuseWhat a cute story. I do like the plot line and how they fell in love. It's so damn cute and stuff...I do really like how they got back at Rachael though that was pure genious. Lindsey was the cutest character of them all though...I think because she was the baby of them all. |
| becxfok01 2005-05-08 ch 21, | abuseI really liked this story. I love how the girl managed to open up the guy. These stories are always the sweetest. And it was realistic in that she didn't immediately decide to stay because of muchy words. It's because she actually thought things through. thanks for writing this story! |
| Forget-The-Sorrow 2005-05-01 ch 21, | abuseI must be very dense. I didn't realize that was the end. I LOVED IT! It was a great story! |