|Reviews for I Won't Be There|
| Sam 5/25/13 . chapter 1
Do you live in Florida?
| moonstar 10/3/11 . chapter 1
OMG haha this is so funny i did the same thing in my high school i went to the guys locker room but they were already dressed and the frikin p.e teacher got all pissed and called security. i did not get expelled but had to go to detention for one full semester. and when i read the first line i started laughing. because we did the same thing
| Daiseyyy 1/29/11 . chapter 21
What a great story this was! I'm so glad that you put this on Fictionpress so that we were the first to experience this! Thank you so much! I really love your stories! They are awesome! I hope to read more of your stories... You are great!
| Dustland 9/15/10 . chapter 4
I love skye :D
..So, in my head they all have country accents, which doesn't exactly make sense...but whatever. :)
| Bitterblue23 6/4/10 . chapter 21
| Your Execution 11/4/09 . chapter 21
AAHHmygod this was so awsome :D
| XxCaptainKoalaxX 10/2/09 . chapter 21
| ghurl00 6/3/09 . chapter 21
that story was adorable, i tell you.:))
i lavved it!:))
| simplyanaddiction 5/9/09 . chapter 5
funny... my name's rachel, too.
the story's going great. even though it was written in 2002, i hope you get this.
| 3DarkGoddess3 3/25/09 . chapter 21
Really sweet story. I like all the characters. Jared turned out to be very sweet.
| Angel-Leigh Jones 1/1/09 . chapter 21
| Angel-Leigh Jones 1/1/09 . chapter 3
another error :)
you called jared, Jake in this sentence
I waved a hand at her and headed back for the house. Jake was on the porch, talking on the phone. I’m not one to eavesdrop, but I was curious.
Hope this helps
| Angel-Leigh Jones 1/1/09 . chapter 2
great first chapter and second. I really like your style of writing.
I found a little error i think. In the last paragraph it says that kathy called Lindsay and Eric to dinner. Isn't Eric meant to be Jared?
Can't wait to read the rest.
| christinaxxyo 12/10/08 . chapter 21
The idea of the story was really good but you had a lot of grammar mistakes and the way you wrote it wasn't the best. It didn't really seem realistic either but besides that, it was pretty good. :)
| christinaxxyo 12/10/08 . chapter 1
Hailey seems like such an awesome person. There weren't many descriptions about the characters but I'm liking the rest of the story. Nice job :)