I really liked this story. I love how the girl managed to open up the guy. These stories are always the sweetest. And it was realistic in that she didn't immediately decide to stay because of muchy words. It's because she actually thought things through. thanks for writing this story!

I must be very dense. I didn't realize that was the end. I LOVED IT! It was a great story!

Yay! Another one of your amazingly written stories..It's cliche and there's no better way of describing it, but I certainly LOVE cliche..when its as good as this, HELL yeah! Although I find their relationship kind of weird coz they are cousins...but I guess different people have different opinions about that matter...I mean, my parents are cousins..N e ways, Great writing, keep it up!Much love, Meme

hola ur awesome

yeah i like this a lot. its really good.

Aw that was so cute! I enjoyed it. Thanks for the good there a sequel?

This is a really great story so far! Love the plot!

I thought your story was awesome! You did an excellent job! : )

I liked this a lot. I'm also glad you finished it.

awesome story... love the characters

AW! These chapters are SO cute! Continue soon!

hello moto!
hehe sorry, im random! hehe
did you write the storee
about matt and the heiress girl umm...oh giovanni girl! did you write that?
anyway, I like your story! it's good.
keep going!

This was an amazing story! Jared was so cute and stuff! I loved him! And Hailey was such a cool main charector, she wasn't all preppy and stuff and she had a really cool personality! I LOVED THIS STORY! Can't wait to read more of your work!

lol like the journal entry and the prank...might try that sometime

sweet story...im going to check out ur other pieces..great story...the arguments were a little much but whatever works for the story