 Twig'um 2009-06-15 . chapter 11aw thats an adorable story! i want a sequel! NOW! |
 Blackberry Pie 2008-04-11 . chapter 11 Nice, though a bit rushed. Lovely work! |
 Namishka 2004-10-15 . chapter 11! WHAT ! YOU JUST ENDED IT! IT HASN'T EVEN STARTED! RIGHT ANOTHER. A SEQUAL. I SWEAR... I WANT TO READ THE SEQUAL. *HISES* OR YOU'LL KNOW WHY WHEN I COME AFTER YOU. * LAUGHS EVILY* MWAHAHAHA. ...
sorry. feeling evil today. but i do want to read the sequal. |
 Namishka 2004-10-15 . chapter 5it was from laughter. it was so funny when Darius' father just looked dazed and said 'what?' |
 Rhys 2003-10-16 . chapter 5I wasn't going to review until I got to the end but that was so...aw! And funny! Yes, I laughed! Clueless fathers. Makes me happy that everyone's okay with it. |
 Fairyflame 2003-09-14 . chapter 11You have to get to work on a sequel. Now!
And while I'm at it, I might as well say that I am wiating with increasing impatience for more chapters to "The Virtues of Lust and Envy" |
 Ebony Nemesis 2003-08-25 . chapter 11oh, sequel is good, go sequel...
m... sequel...
ok, over my sequel cravings now... very good fic, can't wait to read the sequel...
luv nemmy |
 Ulfr 2003-08-01 . chapter 11Oh no, thats sad. I hope you continue i, or do what ever it is you plan o doing to it very soon. |
 Jesse Michael 2003-07-01 . chapter 10 if you kill jaron all help shiney shoes kill YOU! |
 Jesse Micheal 2003-07-01 . chapter 2 that was so long! |
 ola 2003-06-23 . chapter 11!
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oh...
pleasekeepwriting.don'tstop!
wow. okay, i'll calm down. that was a really cool fic. i really hope you'll post the sequel very soon, or i might go slightly mad *grins*
until then, bye! |
 justandalwaysMo 2003-05-29 . chapter 11Well then I sudgest you keep your semi-promise to us and get to writting! Love this story, though I love the other one more. I read the diary thingy, or at least most of it. Pretty cool, if I do say so myself!
Just and Always,
Mo |
 newtypeshadow 2003-05-15 . chapter 11ok. i got the beginning. and the middle...but 'the end' ? there had BETTER be a sequel. that was SO wicked...::muttering::
on the almost-flip side, this is a cool fic. really cool. i like jaron, i like darius, i look forward to raghnall's training them (anyone that makes telephone calls from payphones to whisper "soon" has *got* to have a wicked streak ^_^), and the double pun during the 'coming out' to the parents was beautiful. hehehe
but what the hell is this 'end' business? |
 LB 2003-04-18 . chapter 11 omg! the end! what the heck! there better be a sequel! ... well seeing as how i havent read this fic in a while i think i'll go check and see if you have that sequel started and posted ... um ... nope you don't. well you do have a companion piece though. i guess i'll go read that then. okay. *grins* more please. got to go. BYE-BYE!! |
 Lady Surreal 2003-04-03 . chapter 11*Big pleading chibi eyes* Please hurry up and write some more!! |