aw thats an adorable story! i want a sequel! NOW!

Nice, though a bit rushed. Lovely work!

! WHAT ! YOU JUST ENDED IT! IT HASN'T EVEN STARTED! RIGHT ANOTHER. A SEQUAL. I SWEAR... I WANT TO READ THE SEQUAL. *HISES* OR YOU'LL KNOW WHY WHEN I COME AFTER YOU. * LAUGHS EVILY* MWAHAHAHA. ...
sorry. feeling evil today. but i do want to read the sequal.

it was from laughter. it was so funny when Darius' father just looked dazed and said 'what?'

I wasn't going to review until I got to the end but that was so...aw! And funny! Yes, I laughed! Clueless fathers. Makes me happy that everyone's okay with it.

You have to get to work on a sequel. Now!
And while I'm at it, I might as well say that I am wiating with increasing impatience for more chapters to "The Virtues of Lust and Envy"

oh, sequel is good, go sequel...

m... sequel...

ok, over my sequel cravings now... very good fic, can't wait to read the sequel...

luv nemmy

Oh no, thats sad. I hope you continue i, or do what ever it is you plan o doing to it very soon.

if you kill jaron all help shiney shoes kill YOU!

that was so long!

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pleasekeepwriting.don'tstop!
wow. okay, i'll calm down. that was a really cool fic. i really hope you'll post the sequel very soon, or i might go slightly mad *grins*
until then, bye!

Well then I sudgest you keep your semi-promise to us and get to writting! Love this story, though I love the other one more. I read the diary thingy, or at least most of it. Pretty cool, if I do say so myself!
Just and Always,
Mo

ok. i got the beginning. and the middle...but 'the end' ? there had BETTER be a sequel. that was SO wicked...::muttering::

on the almost-flip side, this is a cool fic. really cool. i like jaron, i like darius, i look forward to raghnall's training them (anyone that makes telephone calls from payphones to whisper "soon" has *got* to have a wicked streak ^_^), and the double pun during the 'coming out' to the parents was beautiful. hehehe

but what the hell is this 'end' business?

omg! the end! what the heck! there better be a sequel! ... well seeing as how i havent read this fic in a while i think i'll go check and see if you have that sequel started and posted ... um ... nope you don't. well you do have a companion piece though. i guess i'll go read that then. okay. *grins* more please. got to go. BYE-BYE!!

*Big pleading chibi eyes* Please hurry up and write some more!!