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| Blackberry Pie 2008-04-11 ch 11, anon. | abuseNice, though a bit rushed. Lovely work! |
| Namishka 2004-10-15 ch 11,  | abuse! WHAT ! YOU JUST ENDED IT! IT HASN'T EVEN STARTED! RIGHT ANOTHER. A SEQUAL. I SWEAR... I WANT TO READ THE SEQUAL. *HISES* OR YOU'LL KNOW WHY WHEN I COME AFTER YOU. * LAUGHS EVILY* MWAHAHAHA. ... sorry. feeling evil today. but i do want to read the sequal. |
| Namishka 2004-10-15 ch 5, | abuseit was from laughter. it was so funny when Darius' father just looked dazed and said 'what?' |
| Rhys 2003-10-16 ch 5, | abuseI wasn't going to review until I got to the end but that was so...aw! And funny! Yes, I laughed! Clueless fathers. Makes me happy that everyone's okay with it. |
| Fairyflame 2003-09-14 ch 11, | abuseYou have to get to work on a sequel. Now! And while I'm at it, I might as well say that I am wiating with increasing impatience for more chapters to "The Virtues of Lust and Envy" |
| Ebony Nemesis 2003-08-25 ch 11, | abuseoh, sequel is good, go sequel... m... sequel... ok, over my sequel cravings now... very good fic, can't wait to read the sequel... luv nemmy |
| Ulfr 2003-08-01 ch 11, | abuseOh no, thats sad. I hope you continue i, or do what ever it is you plan o doing to it very soon. |
| Jesse Michael 2003-07-01 ch 10, anon. | abuseif you kill jaron all help shiney shoes kill YOU! |
| Jesse Micheal 2003-07-01 ch 2, anon. | abusethat was so long! |
| ola 2003-06-23 ch 11, | abuse! ... oh... pleasekeepwriting.don'tstop! wow. okay, i'll calm down. that was a really cool fic. i really hope you'll post the sequel very soon, or i might go slightly mad *grins* until then, bye! |
| justandalwaysMo 2003-05-29 ch 11, | abuseWell then I sudgest you keep your semi-promise to us and get to writting! Love this story, though I love the other one more. I read the diary thingy, or at least most of it. Pretty cool, if I do say so myself! Just and Always, Mo |
| newtypeshadow 2003-05-15 ch 11, | abuseok. i got the beginning. and the middle...but 'the end' ? there had BETTER be a sequel. that was SO wicked...::muttering:: on the almost-flip side, this is a cool fic. really cool. i like jaron, i like darius, i look forward to raghnall's training them (anyone that makes telephone calls from payphones to whisper "soon" has *got* to have a wicked streak ^_^), and the double pun during the 'coming out' to the parents was beautiful. hehehe but what the hell is this 'end' business? |
| LB 2003-04-18 ch 11, anon. | abuseomg! the end! what the heck! there better be a sequel! ... well seeing as how i havent read this fic in a while i think i'll go check and see if you have that sequel started and posted ... um ... nope you don't. well you do have a companion piece though. i guess i'll go read that then. okay. *grins* more please. got to go. BYE-BYE!! |
| Lady Surreal 2003-04-03 ch 11, | abuse*Big pleading chibi eyes* Please hurry up and write some more!! |
| Kaizer K-chan 2003-04-02 ch 11, anon. | abuseMore please! A sequel! *Beg Beg* please Those two are absolutely adorable! |