Aw! So sad and heartfelt! I hope you and your sister see each other again soon.

This is beautiful. I wish I had a big sis too.

I know what its like to have a sibling far away, but then, mine can't come back :(

I have a sister that lives far away. I miss her too! This made my day. ^.^

Aww that's so sad. You're really talented.

This sure is a Heartfelt poem. It's heartwarming, thinking of your sister. I would think of my sisters but they live in the same city as me so I don't miss them all that much. I really hope you have a good time with your sister when she comes to see you. You should edit your poems. You got some talent.

Awww pure sadness...

Once again, good work!

I hope you meet your dear sister soon, in person. I really like how you write your poems. ~*~ Lady Light

Goodness! This is without a doubt your most heartfelt poem. Like 'For my Sister Serenity', this poem shows the true feeling of missing and fighting for a sister. Kudos to you, my girl. These poems of yours just flow along beautifully and I am enjoying them very much.

*Liss

That one was beautiful. It had feeling in it. Real feeling. And hope.. I liked it a lot!

This is good. I hope you write more original poems!

Ooh, that was kind of sad but, you think your little sisters read it? Anyway, I liked it.

I loved this poem. It was very moving and emotional. It made me think about the people I love that live far away that I haven't seen for years. You are very talented. I'm sure this poem would move your sister to tears.

wow, that was nice. i really liked it. it seemd you actually put your heart into it.
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