Besides the equation PV=nRT running through my head, all I can say is...Wow. I lied, I can say a lot more. That was a great story. Think it needs a sequal though. Come on, what happens with this girl? Friends, more than friends, never see each other again ever! Come on! Don't leave me hanging! They gotta be best friends and check out guys together. I always wanted a guy to check out guys with. That would be just so cool. Because when you check out girls with guys it's so weird, you realize that guys and girls are about nothing a like. And I've gone from perv-nerts to wow, to good, to what's next, to checking out other girls. Whoa. Anyway, that was great and I think I'll leave it at that before I start to kill brain cells. Both mine and yours.

beautiful, I almost cried. this is really good. I'm curious to know what inspired you to write it.